Motion comic Storyboard. Pt.2
Motion comic Storyboard. Pt.2
Motion comic storyboard. Pt.1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! No, well, I don’t know, I mean, what’s the point? I’m interested in people knowing my work, not my face xD Tell me later what made you think of this stupid question =3
Hello, I finally found the script for the Audio Drama I was planning, which now evolved into a motion comic project. I put the script to gather some feedback on it. Of course if you haven’t read the comic first, you won’t find it very compelling, but if you did, I’m interested in getting opinions.
I skipped effort in narration because it was supposed to be a script, not a novel or anything like that, so bear with the simplicity :P
Setting: Outside a mall
-People talking voices.
Selena: Hey, girl, I wanted to check up on ya, and see if yer doing it or what.
Leslie: Sigh… I don’t need you to take my hand for this, y’know.
Selena: Don’t be like that, Les, it was mah idea after all.
Leslie: But it was my choice to listen to you, Sel. Nevermind, I’ll let you know, later.
-Car passing by sound.
-People talking voices fading.
Leslie: Let’s hope I won’t regret it…
Setting change: Johnny’s house
-Car being ignited sound repeating a couple of times.
Johnny: Hmmm, since dad got that new car, the Raselle was left behind, it barely works.
-Different sounds of repairs, metal clashing and whatnot.
Johnny: Why does he makes me fix it anyway? Is he gonna sell it?
Ken: How’s the car holding up, son?
Johnny: Well, it seems it works, but some parts look a bit worn-out.
Ken: I guess this car is aging. Well, it could always have a last ride, Victorian cars are really strong.
Johnny: You’re taking it somewhere?
Ken: I’m not, you will.
Ken: Your mother told me, you’re going tonight to explore the night life for the first time, so I thought this could be a good gift for you to celebrate it.
Johnny: I’m just going to explore a night club and have a change of air. Phillip said it might be good for me, nothing more.
Ken: Well, you’re always been a bit uptight, so I think this is a positive change son.
Ken: Besides, you always took care of this car, I cannot find a better owner for it. I already made the transfer, you only have to sign it.
Johnny: Dad… I…
Ken: I know you will take good care of it, so I no longer worry. Besides, selling it is a pain.
Car beign ignited properly.
Ken: That’s a nice sound, enjoy it, son. Later.
Setting change: Les·Bo Records Store
Leslie: I can’t believe you got me into finding a man to get laid with.
Selena: Ya’ asked ‘bout it, I just told ya it ain’t that bad.
- Music being stopped.
Leslie: I was just curious, from that to actually do it…
Selena: Les, it cannot be described, ya have to experience it on yer own, so, ya gonna do it?
Leslie: Only if you promise to never talk about this again.
Selena: Don’t get me involved with this, whatcha do and what I ask are different things.
Setting change: The Disco.
-Electronic sound along with chatter in background.
Johnny: So this is a disco pub… certainly not my place, but anyway, I came for an answer, I’m not leaving without it.
Johnny: I need to find a woman that’s alone, on top of that, also willing to have a one night stand… this is not easy, Phillip, I don’t know how can you do it like it’s nothing…
Johnny: I wonder.. if this was the right thing to do… sigh…
Leslie: Man, this blows, I should’ve asked Sel to come with me, I’ll text her to come.
Leslie: "you’re on your own…" Thanks a bunch, Sel.
Johnny: Nothing will happen by sitting on the bar and doing nothing.
Leslie: I guess might as well just find a guy.
Johnny: Where can I find a desperate looking woman?
Leslie: I need to find a total loser.
Johnny & Leslie: Bingo!
Leslie: 'llo, you alone?
Johnny: Y-yeah… want to go dance for a while?
Johnny: Do you come often here?
Leslie: Oh, I’m sure you’re eager to test your charm skills, but do you mind if we skip all that, in a lousy place like this and just get laid?
Johnny: Eh? Uh… Okay?
Leslie: Fine, two blocks down the street there’s a motel that get good prices when this place is open, and doesn’t seems too shabby.
Johnny: Wow, isn’t she a bit straightforward? I guess she was desperate in the end.
Leslie: I can’t believe he tried to seduce me with those pick up lines, he’s definitely a loser.
Johnny: I wonder…
Leslie: …what will happen after this?
And this is it, not very long and simple, but covers how the story started perfectly, I hope you liked it, and leave a comment in Smackjeeves about your thoughts if you have some :D
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